B5 ACAD 2016 Improving Instruction of the Utah State Core: What can Native Americans Teach us?10/13/2016
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10/17/2016 08:02:58 am
Many schools often overlook the history of Native Americans, regardless of the fact that they are a crucial part of United States history. It is therefore imperative that we teach the story of the Native Americans in full. There are many reasons why, but I will look at three: One, it would take out a huge chunk of US history. Two, lots of people are of Native American descent, and preventing them from learning the Natives’ history would not allow them to learn about some of our history. Lastly, there were a lot of deaths, massacres, and wars between the Europeans and the Natives that are important to history. Native Americans are very paramount to US history and need to be taught.
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Jacob Willford
10/17/2016 08:31:45 am
Native American Essay
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Jacob Willford
10/17/2016 03:15:10 pm
e so that they can have warmth and light. Grandmother Spider uses her webs to make a bag for the sun, after many other animals tried and couldn’t carry it because it burned them. Then Buzzard carried it on the top of his head and flew it up to the sky to where it is today. But doing so burned all the feathers off the top of his head, and that is why he is bald today. Both Grandmother Spider and Buzzard received much praise and reward for their actions. The morals of this story are that you should think about the best way to solve a problem before doing it, and that sometimes self-sacrifice is necessary to bring a greater good to yourself and others.
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Chad Jones
10/17/2016 08:32:49 am
Native Americans are the majority of United States history, and it would be criminal not to teach their story, especially when we can learn tremendously from them. Native Americans have and will shape America into the greatness that we know it as today. For one, we can learn life lessons from their cultures, religions, and stories. Also, Native Americans taught the settlers and explorers the Natives’ way of life and helped them to survive. Last of all, the Native Americans have diverse cultures that still influence us today.
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Chad Jones
10/17/2016 03:48:43 pm
rible bed, and that’s not all of it. Her life is miserable. Eventually, Sedna’s father comes and kills her seabird husband. As Sedna and her father are sailing away from the seabird land, the other seabirds see their brother dead. They go after Sedna and create a storm. Fearing for his life, Sedna’s father pushes Sedna out of the boat, hoping the seabirds will stop the storm. Sedna hangs on to the edge of the boat, so her father cuts off the first digits of her fingers. As her fingers fall into the sea, they turn into the whales. Sedna still hangs on, so her father cuts off the second digits of her fingers, and they become the seals and other sea creatures. The seabirds are satisfied, thinking Sedna will die, so they end the storm. Sedna survives, but she hates her father now. So when they get back to land and her father is asleep, Sedna orders her dogs to gnaw off her father’s limbs. Sedna and her father are both sent to the land under the sea, where Sedna controls the sea creatures. These kinds of stories help us to get a different point of view on how people believe things came to be. We can maybe even understand our own religions better by learning about Native Americans’ religions. Next, Native Americans’ cultures and ways of life help us to be better people today. Native Americans were very resourceful, but never wasteful. The Plains Natives depended heavily upon bison. They found a use for every part of bison, and they never let any go to waste. They would eat the meat, use the hide for tipis and clothes, use the bones for utensils and tools, and used the other parts of it as well. Every Native American culture was like this. They only took and used what they needed. When we learn about this, we can learn to be like this. We can learn to only take what we need and not be wasteful. Finally, by learning about Native Americans’ hard work and the trials they went through to survive, we can appreciate them and what we have more. Most of the Native American population were killed by diseases brought by the Spanish that their bodies weren’t used to. The most common estimate of the number of Native Americans when Columbus arrived is approximately 54 million people. By 1900, there were only 237,000 Natives in America. There would have been even less before they had that time to repopulate. The Native Americans were pushed off of their lands, some put into reservations, others put into mission homes, many were massacred. Learning about this helped me, and it will help others, to not only appreciate the Native Americans more, but to also appreciate what we have today.
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Chad Jones
10/19/2016 02:19:54 pm
Sorry, I just noticed that it did not separate my first and second paragraphs. It should split between:
Charlotte Lindeman
10/17/2016 01:30:37 pm
Ignoring a huge part of our history as a state, as a country, as people in general seems utterly irrational, right? Then why would we ever consider skimming through the fundamental lessons we can learn from the Native Americans? The teaching of Native Americans should not be removed from the Utah State Core, or skimmed over, because we can and should learn several valuable lessons from them as a people, and a culture. Every tribe has very complex and diverse cultures and religions. Also, by studying them we can open our minds and better learn acceptance of others. Lastly, understanding their story can give us a better appreciation for what we have today, and how they helped us move forward as a human race.
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10/17/2016 01:35:41 pm
Often, the solutions to our current world problems are found in history, we just have to look closely for them. Native Americans had and have very culturally different ideas that we need to utilize in order to solve these problems in America. Native Americans can teach us about political structure and about foreign policy, and how to handle it. They were extremely innovative and creative in their infrastructures, and way of life, they were just different from us. Native peoples conserved and minimized waste. Many of these great ideas would be lost if we were to eliminate the study of these peoples from the Utah State Core.
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Kassidy Stauffer
10/17/2016 02:25:00 pm
Some people wonder about the following: Why do we study the lives of Native Americans? While there are many answers, one is, The Native Americans of the past and the present assuredly can and do shape our culture our way of life today; regardless of how little credit we give them. Our education system has a duty to be more thorough as we teach the story of the Native Americans of the past and the present. Some ways that they have influenced us include the physical aspect, the moral code from their stories, and the concept of acceptance and appreciation of others and their beliefs. Simply put, the Natives of this land impact the way we live our lives today, even though many tend to put this fact aside. It is plain-out cruel to do so.
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Kassidy Stauffer
10/17/2016 02:29:17 pm
along the west coast to the Natives, they had the “Missionary Mindset” in mind; they believed that their purpose was to bring Christianity to the Native people. The result of this one-sided mentality resulted in what became known as “Missions” where the Native Americans were, frankly, enslaved and forced to live a life of nothing but work and Christianity. From there, the Natives were not inclined to leave the Spanish with a good reputation; and you can’t exactly expect them to after what happened. Next, we must clarify that the Europeans were accepting in some aspects and the Natives were accepting of others. This particular example is of a Native being considerate of the Europeans. It was recorded by a Jesuit missionary called Jean de Brébeuf and it says: “You tell us fine stories, and there is nothing in what you say that may not be true; but that is good for you who come across the seas. Do you not see that, as we inhabit a world so different from yours, there must be another heaven for us, and another road to reach it?” In other words, this Native happens to not be putting down this foreign religion he has just heard about, but instead acknowledging that it is not a bad thing for people to believe different things. Lastly, in today’s world, there are Inuit tribes who still stand firm in their traditions. However, the thing I admire about them most, is that they have come to accept that the world around them has things to offer, and they accept those things while still being able to hold on to their traditions of the past. The reason I admire this is because there are people who are so concerned that the world is only changing for the worse and it has nothing of value to offer. While this can be true to a limited extent, there are some very technologically advanced things that can provide better experiences.
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Audrey Reece
10/17/2016 03:59:28 pm
There are always two sides to a story, therefore being educated about Native Americans and their story, is vital in understanding the big picture of American history. Do you want your students growing up believing stereotypical judgments about Native Americans, and not fully understanding American history? Native Americans have a very complex culture that many do not understand, or haven’t learned about before, and I believe that it is crucial to be knowledgeable about their culture to understand their history, and the way they live. They were very diverse, and different from the Europeans, and students can learn about how difference is an important role in a balanced society. Learning about the Native Americans, can give students a different perspective, and give them a more open mind. Hence, the Native American history is an important part of our historical education, and is essential in terminating the many stereotypes we have today.
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Ashlyn Barry
10/17/2016 06:34:36 pm
Did you know that a native american creation story includes a Fire god a water monster and a first being named Begochiddy. Native Americans are really important for us to be educated about. We gain many important lessons from Native Americans, so if we didn’t learn about them we would lose valuable life lessons. We can learn several things but I will only address a few, we can and should learn from their advancements. Second we can learn from their culture and what it can mean to us. Lastly we can learn from the conflicts they had with either other tribes or with the Spanish and Europeans. I hope that you will read something that will change your perspective about it.
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Abigail Shumway
10/17/2016 08:07:26 pm
Did you know that the Native Americans have 520 distinct cultures, and we can, and have learned from every single one of them? In the past, Native Americans influenced the world, and they need to continue their contribution to the world we live in today. First of all, they have shaped the culture that this day and age has come to know. Secondly, native people have a great respect for the earth, and we need to learn from them, and their beliefs. Lastly, those great people are responsible for the survival of the Europeans in the past. Children must be taught about these people and all of the things they have to teach us.
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Nathan Soderquist
10/18/2016 07:18:52 pm
Long before this land was the United States of America, there were people here and we need to learn their history. Throughout history they have been shaping US culture. They were around long before European settlers came to the Americas. We can learn a lot from them. I think we should keep a native american unit in the Utah state core because Native Americans have taught us in the past and we can still learn a lot from them today. In the past pilgrims and other early settlers were helped by the natives. Also pioneers going west were helped out a lot by them. One way we can learn from them is to look at their religious stories that teach good morals. We can also learn about their advanced technology and government. Many times we think they were a were primitive people but they were actually very advanced.
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Emma Whipple
10/18/2016 07:39:32 pm
Would your life be different if you had not learned about Native Americans in school? We are who we are because of Native Americans; their history is critical for this generation to acknowledge and understand. Native Americans can teach us many things that are of great worth to us. When we learn about Native Americans, we can understand what values we should have, what to learn from the past, and who we are today as a country and as individuals.
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Emma Whipple
10/18/2016 07:41:03 pm
r problem, using the land provided.
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Emma Whipple
10/18/2016 07:41:53 pm
back to them, even if it will never be the same.
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Téa Randall
10/18/2016 08:55:09 pm
Without knowledge of our prior interactions with Native Americans, the coming generation will not get the privilege of studying amazing peoples. Native Americans will make us better people if we learn their story; if we do not teach this critical piece of our history, these remarkable examples will fade away. These people are examples to us by teaching values through their stories and respecting those they come in contact with. By learning of their religion, we can open our minds and be more accepting toward other people.
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Téa Randall
10/18/2016 08:57:25 pm
this mutual respect, the Plains people were introduced to the horse from the Spanish. It forever changed their lifestyle. They were free to roam wherever they needed, could hunt buffalo easier than before, and it made their nomadic lifestyle less of a hassle. While trading with whites was easy for some, it wasn’t possible for others. The Inuit were not close to any Europeans for a long time. They traded amongst themselves. Traveling across the frozen tundra of Alaska was a sacrifice that they were willing to make to keep up the trade between the two Arctic tribes that lived there. The respect between them was great because they traded what goods they had for goods they didn’t. They kept the trade fair, and never stole because they had what they needed. We could all use the reminder to respect one another at all times, and in all things.
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Annalee Gray
10/19/2016 05:28:58 am
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Trevor Smith
10/19/2016 07:23:48 am
Why Native Americans?
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Trevor Smith (continued)
10/19/2016 07:26:08 am
While native homes are often seen as primitive and made of dirt, the poorer classes of Europeans also had dirt homes at the time of Columbus. Some natives, like some Europeans, had wooden homes. Other inventions from the natives affect our everyday lives, like that of chocolate. Natives also created interesting tools, such as that of canoes, weapons, writing utensils, and more. Overlooking natives, even when they invented so many wonderful objects, foods, tools, and other items, would be detrimental. Moving past the architecture and objects of ancient natives, we encounter political systems. Natives had unique and interesting ways of choosing leaders, and one of which, the Haudenosaunee democracy, was one of the base factors for our nation, and involved not genealogy for supremacy, like those of Europe, but instead it involved voting. It also included many chiefs meeting in courts, much like those of our courts and senates today. Lastly, a very important factor taught by the natives to the Europeans involved bathing. Europeans did not bathe before discovering natives. The natives had bathing houses, sweat lodges, and any other means of simplistic hygiene imaginable. Certain tribes even had animal skins designated as toilet paper! Overall, the natives had many small secrets that we must understand and not overlook. These traits must be viewed with a historical respect that can only happen with the knowledge of the natives’ past.
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Nathan Imbler
10/19/2016 08:44:52 am
Many schools often overlook the history of Native Americans, regardless of the fact that they are a crucial part of United States history. It is therefore imperative that we teach the story of the Native Americans in full. There are many reasons why, but I will look at three: One, it would take out a huge chunk of US history. Two, lots of people are of Native American descent, and preventing them from learning the Natives’ history would not allow them to learn about some of our history. Lastly, there were a lot of deaths, massacres, and wars between the Europeans and the Natives that are important to history. Native Americans are very paramount to US history and need to be taught.
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Tyler Doyle
10/19/2016 08:45:30 am
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Tyler Doyle (continued)
10/19/2016 08:51:40 am
well being of the United States. Citizens living in Native communities were engaged and involved, everyone contributed not just the men. Natives were some of the very first people to respect women, in some cultures women had considerable power, they could vote and hold office hundreds of years before Europeans allowed them to. Take Pocahontas and Sacagawea for example, both were very wise and both had a considerable amount of power and respect. Also Native cultures government was never corrupt, they ran a strict democratic government and every one held each other in check. Today in America our government is slowly and surely becoming more and more corrupt. We have fallen away from our values and are electing candidates that go against majority of people’s beliefs.
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Daniel Prestwich
10/19/2016 08:52:18 am
Native American Essay
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Ammon Grover
10/19/2016 08:54:37 am
Did you know everyone makes mistakes? Enough people have made mistakes, that people have started making quotes for mistakes, some people put posters of these quotes on their walls or make them the wallpaper for thier phone. My point is, people make mistakes. That’s okay, as long as we can learn from them… but how can we learn from mistakes if some people don’t know that some of these mistakes exist. I believe it would be crimeful to not learn about Native Americans. Because of this I believe that we must keep Native Americans in Utah’s learning curriculum.
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Grace Meservy
10/19/2016 08:55:38 am
Dear Common Core State representative:
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Grace Meservy
10/19/2016 08:57:42 am
They have similar values to us, and even what is different can bridge a gap. They were not simple or even similar to each other, except in very minor ways. They impacted this continent very profoundly, and came to our aid at many times. They taught us many valuable things, and if I learned anything from them, it is that I will not go down without a fight. Do not let these stories go untold, these messages unread, or these cultures unknown. If a filing cabinet is where this this letter goes, unread, then what is to say that we will ever learn from our mistakes? Nothing.
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Tyler Trane
10/19/2016 09:03:49 am
The Importance of Education on Native Americans
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Tyler Trane
10/19/2016 09:10:31 am
thrush, and so to this day thrush hardly ever sings his song because he feels guilty when he sings. This can teach us to not brag and boast, and most definitely to not cheat in things. The Native Americans religion, and culture is very interesting to learn about, and it can teach us things about life. The Southwest Native American culture believed that there were multiple gods and they would take all their creations, including us into different worlds when the world they were in was not fit for them. Eventually the gods brought us to this world, and the Native Americans say that when the people become bad again, then the gods will move us again. This shows that we need to stay a good peaceful people. Their stories can also show us consequences of decisions. The Northwest coast Native American group believe that if you quarrel then you will have negative things happen to you and your people, and your creator will give you the consequences. This can teach us that when we fight with one another, it can make others around us unhappy and annoyed. Overall the Native Americans have some very good stories that we can learn from.
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Jonathan Hall
10/19/2016 09:03:50 am
Why Teach About Native Americans?
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Jaysten Larsen
10/19/2016 09:04:46 am
Native Americans have been intertwined with the history of this land since the start. They have been living in America far longer than any European colony. This land has been their home for as long as they can remember. But yet the Utah Legislature are considering taking the study of Native Americans out of the Utah State Core, even though this culture is the real history of our country. I personally believe that we need to learn about Native Americans in our schools; because the media's view of Native Americans has changed the understanding of Natives cultures and beliefs that Americans have. We need to learn about Native people so we can get rid of those wrong Images of Native Americans, before it is too late. Firstly, we have a lot of false Stereotypes of Native Americans. These stereotypes must be changed and the best way to do that is to teach their history in schools. Second, despite popular belief Native’s were extremely kind to early Europeans and where better to teach that then in US schools. Lastly, many people think about Natives as primitive cave men, but in reality they were and are an advanced people. We need to teach all of those thing in schools so we can know the truth about Native Americans.
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Jaysten Larsen
10/19/2016 09:06:30 am
e. For example in the Great Lakes area the Natives created large mounds which were shaped like animals or other spiritual symbols. We believe that they lived on some mounds and worshiped on others. But one thing we do know is that people must be advanced to build such large structures. These peoples also had large cities, such as Cahokia. This city is believed to be the same size as large American cities. It was a huge city with a large temple and many homes and as we have trouble making large cities with machinery they created them with their hands and elbow grease. These people were also very good at surviving. They were all able to survive in the area they lived. The Inuit, for example, were able to survive in the cold, harsh alaskan wilderness. They even learned to build homes out of whale bones and dirt. The south west were able to live in an extremely dry desert. They learned to grow corn and even live in cliff homes, they literally carved homes out of cliff walls. We need to teach our students about these advanced people to teach them you can do hard things.
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Hunter Nelson
10/19/2016 09:06:20 am
Most curriculums in United States schools briefly review the history of Native peoples, I strongly oppose this and believe something must be changed. It should be apparent that Native Americans deserve more recognition and of course there is overwhelming evidence for this extremely sensible claim. Natives have been here for more than 30,000 years and over that time have created massive amounts of diverse cultural history. As result of Natives having been here much longer than us, the United States’ creation was deeply impacted by them. Natives have been here for so long, we have absolutely no right to insult and stereotype them. These points alone should be proof enough, but there is evidence to reinforce their truth. The story of Native Americans builds the majority of the history of the Americas, therefore, respect and education of these good people is of the utmost priority.
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10/19/2016 09:10:40 am
ions and inadequate understanding of native people. If a deeper and fuller education unit for Native people were in place, the disrespectful stereotypes would become much more limited. By eradicating these stereotypes and rude conjectures, 30,000 years of native teaching can be brought to light and commonly accepted.
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Jackson Wight
10/19/2016 09:11:41 am
Have you ever thought that all Native Americans lived in tepees and were nomadic, or heard someone else that thought that? This is common among American citizens, and even more so among people in other countries. Some people even think that Native culture and history shouldn’t be taught in our school curriculum because it’s not important. I say that is ridiculous. Natives shaped our history and future to such an extent that it would be a crime to not teach it. This is why I believe that Native American history and culture should be taught in all schools in depth because they had gratitude towards settlers and their goals, they taught us very important lessons about life and the environment, and they were very advanced in religion, culture, and lifestyle.
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Jackson Wight (continued)
10/19/2016 09:12:53 am
rdy. They had to make them like this to survive the hurricanes in their region. They also had very advanced supplies and ways to get them. For example, the Eastern Woodland people put tomahawk blades into trees when boys were born. By the time they were eleven, the tree had grown a handle for the tomahawk. Native Americans had very advanced lifestyles as well. They actually invented the democracy government we have today. The Inuit people lived in the harshest environment on the planet. They lived in upper Canada and Alaska. They couldn’t use the same supplies as other Native People. They used seal and whale fat for fuel for their fires. They had very advanced religions. Like the Dine tribe. Their creation story is very complex with multiple worlds and first beings. So Native Americans were in fact very advanced and contributed to our society a great deal.
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Andrew Smith (continued)
10/19/2016 11:26:40 am
The baby was the only survivor. Unless we want something terrible like the Wounded Knee Massacre to happen again, we need to learn from what we’ve done and how we think about it.
Andrew Smith
10/19/2016 10:16:56 am
Native American Walkaway
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Blake Hill
10/19/2016 02:25:56 pm
Native American Essay
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Blake Hill (continued)
10/19/2016 02:28:13 pm
song. When he got down all of the birds were very angry with Thrush and he was very ashamed of what he did. Now Thrush barely ever sings his song even though it is the most beautiful. This story teaches us not to go around bragging and boasting and also not to cheat because they will both backfire on you.
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Abigail HAmpton
10/19/2016 03:01:26 pm
Native Americans teach us a more purposeful and better way of living our lives They show us purposeful living showing how their diet sustained their lives,how they taught morality and religion and taught that diversity was encouraged. They knew how to live their lives with purpose.
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Elliot Grace
10/19/2016 04:41:24 pm
Through native americans we can learn to improve morals and improve the world through their advancements and technology. I believe we can do this through Native American Technology and complexity, Letting their culture to help our morals and health, and native struggles
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Avery Takahashi
10/21/2016 07:28:25 am
In the past Native Americans have impacted our world in more ways than one, and they can still influence our lives today. Previously they helped the pilgrims survive in the foreign land and have shaped our culture today. Now the present-day world needs their help again. Using their moral code we can solve many world wide problems.
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Ashlyn Barry
10/24/2016 09:35:36 am
Lastly we can gain a knowledge that there are better ways to solve somethings other than fighting. The ghost dances for instance, the Europeans were scared that the Indians were going to attack them when really the Native Americans were just dancing because they had a sliver of hope that things could return back to normal. The Europeans didn’t talk to them at all they just attacked and killed a to of people. From this we can prevent another Wounded Knee from happening. The Indians have probably done something like that too, and it just isn’t the way to resolve things.
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All teachers in the State of Utah, must use the Utah State Core to dictate what they will teach. The core requires educators to do the following when teaching Native Cultures
Explore life among the various American Indian nations prior to European exploration of the New World.
Identify the major regional American Indian nations of North America
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